Showing posts with label LA Writer's Day. Show all posts
Showing posts with label LA Writer's Day. Show all posts

Tuesday, February 28, 2017

Writing ExerciseS - So Delinquent

Yup - last day of the month but I hope these exercises will make up for not posting in January. That's why I added the capital S because there is more than one! In fact, there are three. I added an extra one, just in case! Yes, I shake my head at myself.


I was just at LA Writer's Day on Saturday, Feb 25 (two days after my birthday) (yes, I love birthday hoopla), and in one of the breakout sessions by Pam Gruber, she had us do a writing exercise on world building. That's the first writing exercise. The other two are word prompts. All are so incredibly different from the other. You never know where your brain goes.


Glad to be posting something, finally, and I hope you join in wherever you are.




Breakout Session on world building. Prompt: a school

             The lone building, red with white trim, housed a steeple where the bell would ring to usher students in and send them home again.

            Wooden tables and benches, small in comparison to the teacher’s desk, were shiny from wear. Student trousers and books making their marks in the world and not the academic kind.

            Chalkboard erasers and dust lined the front of the room behind the teacher’s desk. The only globe in town sat in the corner as if it was being punished. The pencil sharpener on the wall near the front so teacher could keep watch on those avoiding their arithmetic assignments.

            The one thing that did not belong and stood out like a sore thumb was the single desk nobody would ever sit in again. It should have burned when the school first went up in flames two years ago.

    But it was the lone survivor.



Words: fame, troop, learn, tune
             My girl scout troop #725 was asked to perform on television! We screamed and jumped up and down holding hands. Fame was waiting for us!
            It was cookie time of year and to boost sales, our scout leader was determined to beat troop #722 because they were always outselling all of us in the area. She worked her magic and knew someone at the local station.
            Scout leader lined us up; shortest in front and tall girls in the second row. I was front and center. We were asked to sing the Itsy Bitsy Spider song on three.
            To say we were in tune would be a gigantic lie. And we do not lie. And apparently, we do not sing either.
            The look on our troop leader’s face was one I wished I caught on my phone. She paced back and forth in front of us, mumbling about how quickly could we learn to sing and could she use a recording instead and maybe other girls.
            So much for fame. Maybe she should have asked us if we could sing first.
            Hey, I can tap dance!

 
Words: hell, midnight, barrier, iron
             The dark of midnight created its own hell within my mind. Every shadow wanted to do me harm. Every sound another attack.
            Stuck beneath the barrier to the bridge, I longed to call out to someone passing by. Fear kept my mouth closed. The damp and cold settled in my joints. Each crouched movement screamed with pain.
            The iron grate held me in this prison like handcuffs. If I escaped, would he really hurt my family? Even if I didn’t escape, he may still do something unspeakable to those I loved.
  I had to try.


Thursday, March 27, 2014

LA Writer's Day Recap and Photos!

This past weekend, I spent two days with writers, agents, editors, presenters of all kinds. Lovely people, all of them. There was something for everyone and a take-away from each session. And a lot of laughter. The theme was about connections. Big thanks and a great job done by the LA County Coordinators, Sarah Laurence, Lee Wind and Sally Rogan Jones and all their volunteers.

The very entertaining and true-to-herself, Katherine Applegate (THE ONE AND ONLY IVAN) gave us ten points on being a writer. Write how you write. It may be how some work and not others. Plus she and her husband, Michael Grant, put together a hilarious video. I will not forget it. Connecting with oneself.

Catherine Linka (A GIRL CALLED FEARLESS), book seller extraordinaire, was helpful in deciphering online connections. Goodreads, Edelweiss, etc. Make sure you have a good presentation for kids. Connecting online.

Heidi Fiedler, Editor, taught us about book mapping. Heck, if it's good enough for JK Rowling, it's good enough for us. Connecting the story scene by scene.

Danielle Smith, Agent, showed us how to connect the first sentence and the last sentence and how to make your words count in between. Connecting the story with readers.

Martha Alderson, The Plot Whisperer, and also the sweetest lady,  taught us, well three pages worth of notes! My brain was firing thoughts at me about my new story as she spoke. Awesome. She's not called The Plot Whisperer for nothing. Connecting plots.

And that was just Day 1! The second day was for intensives. And I just wanted to go to them all.

So now for some photos - taken with an iPod so quality isn't completely fabulous.

Martha, Katherine A, Heidi, Catherine L, and Danielle
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Heidi and Danielle - so sweet to smile while I rudely interrupted them for a photo

Martha and Agent Jill Corcoran