Friday, September 5, 2014

An Actual Writing Exercise!

It's been so long since the last writing exercise. Life has a way of taking over sometimes. I had tried an exercise a few weeks ago and it was horrible.
Today, I decided to look up great first lines and have used that as a jumping off point for another writing exercise. It worked. Didn't take long, which is so helpful these days. Hope you'll join in wherever you are. I've found some good ones! 

Prompts:

“All happy families are alike; each unhappy family is unhappy in its own way.”
Anna Karenina, Tolstoy

“It was a bright cold day in April, and the clocks were striking thirteen.”
Nineteen Eight-Four, Orwell

“The past is a foreign country: they do things differently there.”
The Go-Between, Hartley

“I am a camera with its shutter open, quite passive, recording, not thinking.”
Good-bye to Berlin, Isherwood

Result:

I am a camera with its shutter open, quite passive, recording, not thinking. Or so they presume. They think I don’t see. But I do. And hear. All stored on my hard drive. Forever.
One day they will regret the things they do to me. Everything they say to me. Agreeing no one is inside my shell of a body. “Lights aren’t on and nobody is home,” they laugh.
Soon. I have to believe that one day soon I will exact my step by step by step revenge. They’ll never see it coming.

Tuesday, July 1, 2014

Book Blurb: TIN STAR by Cecil Castellucci


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This blurb was provided by the one and only Lynn Becker! Find her at:
www.lynnbeckerbooks.com

TIN STAR, by Cecil Castellucci, is an enjoyable YA space adventure with a Casablanca-like feel to it. Tula Bane is on her way to help establish a colony on the planet Beta Granade, until her spaceship unexpectedly malfunctions. When the ship stops at a remote space station, she is beaten and left for dead. Stuck in a place that no one came to "unless they were lost or in trouble," Tula learns to wheel and deal with the resident aliens to survive. She also dreams of getting off the space station so she can take revenge on Brother Blue, the man who tried to kill her. However, Brother Blue happens to be the powerful leader in charge of Earth's attempts to colonize the galaxy. When three more humans arrive on the station and find themselves stuck, too, things begin to heat up. This is fun, accessible science fiction that will keep readers guessing.

Tuesday, June 17, 2014

Book Review: SAY WHAT YOU WILL by Cammie McGovern


If you’re looking for diversity in novels, SAY WHAT YOU WILL by Cammie McGovern, is exactly that. Told from two perspectives, the female main character, Amy, has cerebral palsy. The male main character, Matthew, has OCD.

The story starts in the last year of high school, continues through the summer and into the first year of college. This novel probably falls into the New Adult category.

I found a better insight into people who have these particular conditions. You get to feel and experience what goes on inside them. Amy talks with a computer keyboard that voices what she wants to say. She can type in a speech beforehand or type a response with her one working hand that isn’t spastic. Matthew’s OCD shows us his internal struggle. They find a way to help each other face the truths they haven’t faced before.

Matthew challenges Amy that she’s happy on the outside and surpasses all goals, but that isn’t really how she feels. Amy gives Matthew exercises to overcome some of his issues and gets him to see that going to a doctor, taking meds and accepting help really does make a difference.

There is a lot more going on in this book, too. Amy’s mother pushes her to excel at everything and Amy has to figure out what she actually likes and who she is without people telling her. The mishmash of friends she ends up with due to hiring classmates to be her aids at school, bring her experiences she’s never had before.

What I liked about this story is that it isn’t predictable. That’s not always easy to find. The story shows how not communicating or actually saying what you feel, can lead you down different paths, not the way you thought it would.

I was curious as to how this story came about and I checked out Cammie McGovern’s website and found that exact question and her answer. Here is her website and below is the question she answers on her website. http://www.cammiemcgovern.com/faq/

How did you get the idea for Say What You Will?

One of the mothers who helped start Whole Children had a daughter born with pretty severe cerebral palsy.  After she was born, her parents were told she would probably never learn to walk, talk, or even roll over.  Maybe because her problems were so different than my son’s—who could run around fine, in fact that’s all he did do—I became really fascinated by the long and amazing journey this girl took.  She not only learned to roll over, she was walking independently by the time she was eight, and has since gone on to defy all the doctor’s initial predictions.  She’s still a part of Whole Children and a dear friend of my son’s (in fact, if you watch the Whole Children music video, that’s her and my son in the second to last snippet.  What a wonderful smile she has, looking up lovingly at my boy…)

Great information about her, the WHOLE CHILDREN program and her other books. SAY WHAT YOU WILL published on June 3, 2014.